This is another 75-word piece I just submitted to the site.
Finding Faith
"Do you believe in God?"
Faith was looking out the window when her little sister, Chloe, asked the question.
"I'd like to believe," Faith replied, the red and blue lights now splashing against the glass.
"Do you think they will find us?"
Faith touched the glass with her fingertip and dragged it along the chilled frost, but once again, her print was denied by the stubborn rules of a physical world. "I hope so."
This was awesome.. it gave me chills!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Josie! If at least one person liked it, it was well worth it. It didn't get picked up by Paragraph Planet, but still saving it for an anthology of 75-word stories I may be putting out in the later days.
DeleteThanks for stoppin by and I will keep reminding my tweeps about your awesome Six Sentence writing event!
Have a great weekend!
Come to think of it, this would have been perfect for the Six Sentence challenge. Oh well. =D
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